in the midnight hour
a black raven calls to me
come to the forest
THE RAVEN
Now,
in winter, I follow a path
a
fire road carved out of the woods through the trees
winding in and out like a snake seeking food
I
feel the cold wind on my back
cutting through my light jacket
the sharp teeth of winter biting my face
a deep grey sky indicates a pending
snowstorm
In
the distance, a black crow caws his message to the forest
echoing on the cold, heavy air
He
receives no answer to his call
A
raven, unexpectedly, has perched upon my shoulder
its blue-black wings tight against its
slender, hollow bones
leaning
slightly forward, his jet black eye peers into mine
speaking a silent language
warning me
but
I cannot hear the silent thoughts
“Why,
raven, have you sought me out among all others?
What
message do you bring me?”
but
the silent raven only stares
and digs with sharp talons into my coat
the
wind moves his feathers in a flapping motion
as if willing him to fly
yet
he clings
“What
is the message, raven?” I ask again
silently, without sound, my lips still
but his
eyes, like deep dark pools of swirly muddy water
give only a penetrating stare
the
wind increases
the
dark bird flies
and I am left to face the coldness of the
night alone
wondering if the raven has stolen my soul
where you can find some lovely haiku
my paintings acrylic
from a past traveling
journal. Blue moon from
publicdomainpictures.net
I knew you would have a spooky story for us! And you never fail, dear Judy! Ravens were with me my entire pilgrimage... I think they actually helped me find more of my soul! Great story, haiku and art, I still have chills. Thanks also for your welcome back from my long trek... into the dark forest... XO
ReplyDeleteSuch lovely artwork and haiku is great for Halloween ~
ReplyDeleteLive each moment with love,
A ShutterBug Explores,
aka (A Creative Harbor)
I have a HUGE weakness for the raven family and read and admired your images with intense pleasure. Many, many thanks.
ReplyDeletespooky haiku and
ReplyDeletea superb Halloween poem
in sync
Thanks for dropping by my blog
Much💛love
The call of the uncanny is hard for me to ignore, but there's no guarantee I'll get an answer I like or anyone at all if I listen. Maybe the answer is as simple as understanding there's a call out there to begin with.
ReplyDeleteI really like how the haiku is like a door into the longer poem. How its ominous tone feeds my curiosity. I found myself thinking, Will she answer the call? Then, when I read that she followed the path, I surprised by what she found (or didn't find). Life and calls and such, are just like that--unpredictable.
ReplyDeleteA super Haiku for Halloween.
ReplyDeleteHave a happy November.
All the best Jan
We don't have to answer every call that comes to us, especially those that come from creatures that might lead us into danger.
ReplyDeleteoh my friend and most ardent lover of birds-we share the allure and respect of ravens. i hope you are warm as the storm approaches. i hope you are safe and comforted.
ReplyDeleteI love your words and I love your paintings! You are amazing! Big Hugs!
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