Haiku My Heart - Water

The fish swam below
It looked up at the oil sheen
Could not find the light
Well, hooray for Conoco Phillips, Chevron, Exxon Mobile, Shell, etc. etc.  There is another drilling rig on fire off the coast of Louisiana.  Kudos to the government officials who gave back the drilling rights in the gulf that were suspended after the horrible spill a couple of years ago.  Since then, there have also been spills in Mississippi, Arkansas, New Jersey, Texas, Utah, Montana, and that is only in the U.S.  When will it end?  Never, I'm afraid. 
"They" say it isn't so bad this time because it's natural gas and not crude oil. I recall the crude oil spill off the coast of LA was supposed to be "not so bad" and "contained", etc. etc.  You decide.
After the huge Louisiana spill, I wrote a short story to express my frustrations to myself. It was my way of crying.  I have revised that story to include only oil spills, instead of the logging deforestation it originally included.  If you wish, read my tears again.
   The songbird’s trill filtered almost visibly through the branches and gently dancing greenery of the tall forest pines, as if he were staking out his territory against possible intruders.  His song moved as the wind moves, in and out of the branches, tickling the leaves, and changing force and tune every few minutes.  After a few more echoing notes, his wings suddenly lifted and he was gone, as quickly and quietly as he had come.  Except for the whispering breezes that moved the highest leaves in the twinkling sunlight, the tallest reaches of the forest was silent again.
   At the base of the trees the short and sparse wild grass, unable to grow thick stalks because of the unreliability of enough sunlight reaching through the thickness of the trees, lay flat under the feet of the small animal that rummaged through the sticks and leaves searching for food.  The grass sprang back up, alert as a sentry, as the animal passed by.  The swift running current of a narrow rocky stream wound its way around jagged rocks covered with green algae, bubbling and caressing the edges of the rocks as if they were the lips of passing lovers soon to be gone around the next curve.  The moist ground along the banks of the stream was cool, clean, unravaged by disaster and turmoil, as yet untouched by man.
   Several hundred miles to the west, where man had already been, a thin, almost shadow of a man stood on a narrow strip of salt and pepper sand. As his light colored hair blew in little whirlwinds, his blue eyes squinted out over the vast expanse of water, watching the sun begin to lower itself onto the distant horizon. The water lapped against the shore near his feet and the cloudless sky overhead darkened as if a giant theater light was being slowly turned down in stages. Fading streaks of orange and pink and deepest blue lay across the distant sky. The man was dressed in light colored trousers and a loose fitting shirt, both of which moved against his body as the wind shifted around his slight form, like laundry hanging on a clothesline on a breezy day. His narrow face was weathered, older than his years, telling of long hours and much passing time working outdoors in the sun. Barefoot, he carried his simple sandals in one hand. His friends called him Jack, and he was a man of few words.
   As he stood there in the back end of the day, Jack thought of when he was a boy of about ten, nearly twenty years ago now.  He lived near this beach then, and it was much wider and pristine  white.  He remembered it was so white the sun made the tiny sand particles glisten as if they were mixed with diamond dust.  He stood there recalling his joy building sand castles, running and jumping on the skimboard, surf fishing with his dad. Doing the stingray shuffle (he did get stung once), riding his bike home before it got too dark.  This had been his playground, his back yard.  He now had a little difficulty letting his mind wrap around the fact that twenty years had gone by!  Jack turned his back to the water and let his eyes skim over the land behind him.  He remembered the marshy grasses with brown pelicans nesting.  He thought of all the gulls he had chased relentlessly as boys do, delighting in their swift escape.   His mind wandered over the crabs he carefully caught, picking them up just right so as not to get his fingers pinched, taking them home to his mom’s boil pot. He stood there letting his memory savor the taste of the tender white crabmeat, the sweetness of the memory causing his salivary glands to activate, reminding him he was a little hungry.  Life was good then.  They were not a rich family, for they lived off the waters that his dad’s fishing boat traveled, and fishermen never get rich. But life was good.
   And then the oil came.
   It crept up onto the beach and into the marshes like a silent, stealthy plague, wreaking havoc in its path.  Jack remembered the acrid smell, brought to his nostrils on the ever-present ocean breeze.  He didn’t know what it was the first time he smelled it.  But it was not long before he was told of the horror of the leaking underwater pipeline gushing the thick black crude into the pristine waters.  In his mind’s eye, he could still see the sweet meaty crabs covered with black scum, slowly dying on the beach. All kinds of fish washed ashore, along with air-breathing dolphins that had come to the surface to breathe, and sucked in killing oil. Sharks moved in and out of the shallows, seeking fresh water and clean prey. Jellyfish, transparent filter feeders black with ingested oil, washed up and lay in the sun dying.  The people of the area were shocked and devastated, and cried out to the world for help. Marsh grasses died, their roots unable to get the sun and oxygen needed for growth, for life. Frogs, alligators, even the tiniest of grass snails were covered in black slime, the life smothered out of them. Seabirds floundered and died, their feathers stuck together, unable to fly out of the danger.  Covered in oil, they floated in the surf in the sun and high temperatures, the oil becoming hotter and hotter until they suffocated from the additional heat.   And still the oil came.
   Jack’s beach had been inundated with news people, and at ten years old he could just begin to understand the domino effect the oil would have on the fishing and other industries. He had been just a boy, after all, and boys don’t think about much except being boys.  Then, his own father, after months and months of not being able fish, not being able to provide for his family, became a broken, sad man.  People said it would take decades to repair the damage.  As he looked around now at his once beautiful beach, he thought to himself that decades had been an understatement.  It had already been two decades, and still there was only death and loneliness here.  It had not helped that a hurricane came and pushed the oil even further into the marshes and into the fresh water rivers, spraying it over the land so that everything it touched had a slick, shiny, rainbow appearance. No more could Jack find the tiny, bio luminescent micro organisms that would flash in the dark, delighting the boys that splashed in the surf at night.   They should have said never, he thought. Never would it be repaired!
   And the oil continued to flow.  It flowed south to more beaches.  The thick underwater plumes followed the currents all the way to the beautiful, endangered coral reefs, and sank over them, smothering and killing their beauty and the life that teemed among them.  Over the years, the migratory fish that survived changed their route and no longer inhabited these waters.  The blue fin tuna, for centuries using these waters as their breeding grounds, had not been seen in many years.  Loggerheads no longer laid their eggs in sandy nests along these beaches.  Businesses failed and closed, tourists stayed away, life as Jack knew it as a boy no longer existed.  And he stood now, looking at his boyhood love, his own backyard, and silently wept.
   Years later and several hundred miles toward the east where Jack had never been, a new songbird came to the branch in the tallest of the forest pines. The sun began to rise, bringing its life and warmth to the land, causing slivers of light to run like quicksilver through the spaces between the leaves and branches, gradually bringing light to the forest floor. The delicate leaves and pine needles moved with the gentle breeze, tiny ballerina dancers practicing for a recital to be performed for the forest creatures.  The songbird began his prelude, and his soft feathered chest swelled with a symphony of happy song. On the ground near the rocky stream, a small animal foraged for his breakfast, his little eyes watching the rainbow hue slowly making its way toward him through the clear, bubbling water.  The songbird became silent, his eye also catching the unusual sight. Curious, he flew down to drink. The small animal watched, unknowing, unafraid, and he too began to drink as the oil from a new spill made its way from the gulf marshes through the life-giving inland stream.
     Man, and his pollution, had come to the forest.  
 I know, I know, some of you say "Girl, you have to have gas for your car, and those big jetliners you cruise on sometimes have to have fuel!"  I know, but it seems there could be more safety regulations in place.  Or something.  It seems those big moneymakers could have a little compassion for the innocent.  I know.  Green talks.  I mean paper green.  Meanwhile, I'll just cry. It will make me feel better! 

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UPDATE:  Thursday evening, the news media says the fire is out. 



  1. If I were you, I'd make copies of your fabulous and heart wrenching story and mail one to each of the companies. Their addresses are readily available. It's so sad to see God's creatures full of oil and not able to breathe. I cry for them too and for all that have been faced with this. . Let them know how you feel. Your story expresses it all. Excellent work.

  2. Powerful story ~ and explicit photo and delightful haiku ~ Some day the 'world' might learn. Thanks for sharing.

    I agree said this story to the oil companies and the government.

  3. So well said, Judie! It is incomprehensible----this kind of damage that really never ends, and reaches so far----One wonders where this will end. We are so uncaring about the incredible effects our indifference brings to NOT just our world but the world of animals, birds, fish and the land that we pollute! It is more than horrific.

  4. So heartbreaking and just completely wrong... we only have this one planet to tend, and the mending of all we've done to harm her is endless.

  5. I'm speechless through my tears. It is all true, and we are the reason. I don't have the guts to stop driving. Yet you are correct about more and safer ways could be developed. Maybe that would happen if we were willing to pay the higher prices for fuel. It's always about the money.
    I will have this in my mind today. In fact, I need the diversion from the thoughts I shared at my Haiku My Heart posting today.
    Your heart cares enough to cry. I am impressed by that.


  6. Your prose is like poetry Judie,
    lyrical and full of regret.
    I know how you feel too.
    It is a helpless situation,
    but your caring vibrations are felt
    all through the Earth.
    And that has to count for something, doesn't it?

    On a happier note:
    ♥Love♥ Lisa

  7. Powerfully written. A poignant piece

  8. oh dear
    don't get me started
    our florida governor
    is The Worse about this issue ...

    i love to fly
    & see the world
    & would Miss that
    but also
    i go 2 days at a time
    without driving my car ...

    there are things we can all do
    but the legislation is so bad
    when Lobbyist write the Laws ...
    which i have seen happen
    time and time again ...

    {{ do not give up the battle ♥
    ever }}

  9. What is to become of this planet? I do know that the earth rejuvenates and heals itself much like our bodies do. However after so much abuse how long will this story will go on without complete devastation? We must each do whatever we can.

  10. What a photo! It says it all. And a very interesting piece of writing too.

  11. this breaks my heart, plus I'd like to break open the Congress' thinking process, if there are any of them who think about consequences of the way they vote! I'm afraid that none do. :(

  12. makes me sad...I am all for alternatives, let's think outside of the box and quit putting our money into big oil pockets.


  13. Heartbreakingly sad! And you have articulated it so well!

  14. Here we go again..it seems there is never a lesson learned.

  15. saddening, there must be a more remedial approach

    much love

  16. Horrible and sad. Will man ever learn!


  17. Yours is a well written and sobering story that we all should read on a regular basis. It's so easy to forget...especially when we don't live in the area...or another tragic "news" story takes its place. The ads tell us that the coast is fine, the food is healthy, the animals and plants are back, but they are either in collective denial or choose not to believe the ramifications that will last for eons to come. For an intelligent species, we can really be greedy, ignorant, and stupid.


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